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with heavy eyes
and abject sighs,
you're visiting,
envisioning

a frosty life lost-
it has cost you
everything
but anything will do
tonight.

with laughter dying out
and fading out of sight,
you close your eyes and listen-
get ready to ignite your mind,

it's all alright

it's all alright

so take your sorry soul
and lost control,
tumbling without a care
into everywhere,

a debonair sigh,
a swift goodbye,
you're gone,
moved on past the
black and white
of my starlight.

good night-

it's all alright.
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:iconcelestialmemories:
CelestialMemories Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The rhythm of this is excellent :love:
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I'm glad c: <3
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:iconcelestialmemories:
CelestialMemories Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You are so very welcome! :iconiluplz:
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:iconcerealnovels:
cerealnovels Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
tumbling without a care
into everywhere,

I love these lines. They say so much in so few words. 
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much c: <3
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TheWritingDragon Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the rhyming scheme :D it was subtly there :la:
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :aww:
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