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she had nice eyes,
the kind you liked to draw
with watercolor tears
and ink like the moon's
stolen glow.

he had memorized
her midnight lashes,
the half-closed shutters
and memories locked away
behind a pupil,
and his pencil was the
key.

yellow
were the specks in her
irises of emerald
springs;
everything she touched
turned into gold,
everything she touched
died
and rose anew
like budding flowers
after the blizzard.

his pencil
could never do the same,
he knew;
but he'd give those eyes away
for a dime apiece,
ignoring the fact
that ebony charcoal
and half-dried acrylics
were all that she would
ever be.
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hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aaahhh I love this story!
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :love: This is something I wasn't sure of when I started it, but somehow ended up at in the end. :D
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angelfire8080 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
beautiful. truly talented <3
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. c: <33
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Lyrica-Lee Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is so alive! I'm completely fascinated by your imagery.. Beautiful work.
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!! :huggle:
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PrinceMononke Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist
Wow this amazing favorite thing I've read in a long time
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you c:
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kmills95 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hey. Mind if I print this out and stick it into a journal of sorts I'm keeping? (Crediting you of course.) Literature and images--my own, and select others'--that I've particularly enjoyed. I'm hoping it'll be kind of a lifelong project. If not, that's okay. But I'd love to put this in there, because I have so many many favourites on dA that I eventually forget about the pieces like this.
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my goodness, of course! I'd be honored :love: :huggle:
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MsGeekNerd Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very vivid...
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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MsGeekNerd Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome
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JossB98 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student Writer
Wow that was just wow
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww thanks c: <3
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JossB98 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Student Writer
<3
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BruiseViolet01 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
I love the imagery in this!
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! <3
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TheWritingDragon Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Trying to decipher this one... but loving it so much :giggle:

:dummy: :clap: wonderful, as always, darlin'!
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:la: Thank you!! I sorta came up with it as I was going along :XD:

:huggle:
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TheWritingDragon Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I ALWAYS do that :XD:
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol me too! I'll start out with an idea and end up with something completely different :XD:
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you word so good. :heart: 
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:la: :heart:
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
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SimonWBeresford Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This leaves a good taste in my mouth, or is it the stir-fry I just ate.
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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Infinite-Word-Forge Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Dude. Nice! I like this piece, I like the end most of all. Very well done, my friend!
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!! :heart:
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Infinite-Word-Forge Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Not at all. Masterfully done, this.
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: :thanks: :hug:
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StarlightComet Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this was really powerful and really good
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SpiralingSpontaneity Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much c: <3
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StarlightComet Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :)
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